Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by me myself and i, Dec 30, 2010.

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  1. me myself and i

    me myself and i Account Closed

    Shine a light for me on this furrowed path that i walk on
    For my soul has darkened to night
    Be my friend in this desert be my oasis in life
    For i have no one to pour me a drink

    Open my ears with your sweet tender words
    For the silence is destroying my mind
    Show me your love and wrap it around me
    For i shiver with abandonment and sorrow

    Give me the present as that is a gift
    For the past has caused me such pain
    Tomorrow is here now and i need your hand
    Oh, to be loved again
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    HOw beautiful Pete i am here if ever you need someone to chat okay pm me anytime YOu write with compassion.
  3. The Unforgiven

    The Unforgiven Well-Known Member

    *wub you petey. its a beautiful poem, i know you mean a different kind of love, but know that you are loved, and if you ever need to fall back on me, if you ever need a shoulder or a hand or just someone to be there, im here for you. :hug: :hug:
  4. ~Young-Violet~

    ~Young-Violet~ Banned Member

    Aww, your poem is honestly loveely it's written with alot of compasion and feeling. I loved reading it. If you ever need anyone to talk to, I'm here for you just drop me a PM, I hope you carry on with your poetry very best wishes,
    Young Violet
  5. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    This was so well written and so heart felt...come to NY City and you can have that drink...thanks for sharing, 29
  6. Ravenwing

    Ravenwing Well-Known Member

    That, my friend, is simply stunning.
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