Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by InnerStrength, Aug 31, 2009.

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  1. InnerStrength

    InnerStrength Well-Known Member

    Gazing into that fiery, cracked abyss
    It looks to be a reflection of life itself
    With souls writhing in agony
    A reminder of the living

    They call, their voices demented
    And gurgling with an unknown sickness
    They reach, their pleading eyes the color of jaundice

    What an infinite, heated hole
    What a putrid smell
    Their screams bombard me all at once
    Then I wake
    To something that is worse than any nightmare​
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Yeh good poem life can be the true hell but thankfully we have people who can help us through it now. SF their support is the only thing that keeps me from going totally insane. Good write keep it up
  3. InnerStrength

    InnerStrength Well-Known Member

    Thank you, violet.
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    I like this poem! Thanks for sharing! :heart:
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