Help me feel

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Pink Teardrops, Jul 11, 2010.

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  1. Pink Teardrops

    Pink Teardrops Well-Known Member

    Help me, please; help me feel.
    Make me human; make me real.
    I'm so alien, so ignorant.
    I need a demon that's God-sent.
    I am blind; I can't see.
    Give me pain to set me free.
    I'm so fake. I barely breathe.
    I'm surprised I have a heart that beats.
    Help me, please; help me feel.
    My life's a hoax; it's so surreal.
    Beat me down so I can learn to get up.
    Dehydrate me and give me an empty cup.
    Then tie me to a chair throw me in the water to drown.
    Do it all so I can learn to get out.
    Cut me so I can learn how to heal.
    Give me pain so I can feel.
    A life with comfort is a life without pain.
    And let me tell you, it has no gain.
    Although some say feelings are to dread,
    I'd rather live and die than live already dead.

    Make me human; make me real.
    Help me live; help me feel.
     
  2. pit

    pit Well-Known Member

    It gets the message across with style. Good work!

    :wink:
     
  3. Pink Teardrops

    Pink Teardrops Well-Known Member

    Thank you!
     
  4. Perfect Melancholy

    Perfect Melancholy SF Friend

    stunning but sad, I really like it, but then I do not because it shows the pain you are in :console: :hug:
     
  5. Pink Teardrops

    Pink Teardrops Well-Known Member

    :hug: glad you like it.. it's not good at all but perfect at the same time.
     
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