Help!

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by FoundAndLost1, May 19, 2006.

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  1. Help

    “Help” is a four-letter word
    for desperation and despair expressed.
    Leaves one weak
    but still strong enough to reach out
    and say the word;
    To what and whom
    not described ~
    the solution, not ascribed,
    just a plaintive cry.

    I saw a poster today,
    for what, I don’t know,
    selling something...
    but there was something behind it…
    For it said, “I will make it through this”
    I saw it as a sign
    but whispered under my breath
    “oh yeah?”
    Yet surprised I would even ask…


    FAL1
     
  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    (((FoundandLost1)))

    I like this one particularly well. :goodjob: :goodone: Your meaning comes across clearly. You are one of our (many) gifted poets here. I love reading your works. They merit my admiration. Thank you for the honor!:smile: :thanks: It makes me feel better to have friends such as yourself who understand so well how I'm feeling... and to be able to respond in such a beautiful way!

    gratitudinously and lovingly received,:hug: :flowers:

    least
     
  3. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    wow....

    great poem... you are very talented...

    BP
     
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