Her life is ending

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Gemballs, May 31, 2009.

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  1. Gemballs

    Gemballs Well-Known Member

    i hav MANY poems i have written, if you want to see more, reply and ill continue to post x

    Her eyes softly begin to close
    as her tears slowly stream down her face
    she know death pranced in the room
    she heas the moon calling
    whilst the ocean silently whispers her name
    she just sits and listens
    her hands and eet begin to shiver
    shes torn
    does she go into the deep blue sky
    or stay another day in living hell
    she is trapped in the darkness which no other sees
    she is forced to stop the fighting
    she knows tonight is the nght
    hearing her name over and over
    she is now abl to rest her head with ease
    she begins o dance in the moon
    as theocean softly continues
    to whisper her name
  2. CCK

    CCK Well-Known Member

    Very pretty, I'm not a huge fan of the freeform style myself, but I can definitely appreciate good symbolism. Nice work.
  3. Remedy

    Remedy Chat & Forum Buddy

    Beautiful poem, got a strong image of it. :hug:
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Amazing :heart:
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