Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Confusticated, Jul 5, 2009.

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  1. Confusticated

    Confusticated Well-Known Member

    I never thought this would be easy
    But this is always going to be too hard.
    A life without you…
    Is a life I should discard.

    Neither of us ever wanted this to happen
    We never thought it would.
    We said always and forever,
    This we both understood.

    Now though, nothing makes sense.
    It’s just like a massive blur.
    It even kills me to say your name…
    I always have to say ‘her’.

    In the end, the person you love is
    The one who can always make you happy.
    The one you want to spend the rest of your life with
    Even when they’re snappy.

    They’re the one person who,
    Even if they aren’t talking to you.
    They put a smile on your face and a warm feeling in your heart,
    And you wish you could do the same for them too.

    They say that time is the biggest healer
    But as time goes on, it only gets worse.
    The thought of never being with you,
    It’s what really hurts.

    Thinking back to all the times I was truly happy
    You were always the one responsible.
    Now, I’m so scared I’m losing you forever,
    All because of stupid fools.

    I realised so long ago, almost a year in fact,
    That I knew who I always wanted to have in my life.
    And now things have happened,
    Yet… still, I want you in the future… to be my wife.

    But it hurts so much
    Because I don’t know if it will happen now.
    I look back to how happy we were,
    And look at where we are now, and wonder… how?

    You are by far the best thing that’s ever happened to me
    And that’s the way it will always stay.
    You are all that I think about,
    Each and every day.

    My heart will only ever be yours,
    And you are the only person I can ever really love.
    I hate so much that it doesn’t seem to be working out,
    Though, together we planned to go above.

    I guess what I’m saying is that…
    My heart will be yours always,
    I.. I love you more than anything
    And I’ll always be here for you, even if I have to walk through a blaze.
  2. Confusticated

    Confusticated Well-Known Member

    Sorry, this is one of the worst I've written. Just needed to get it out, hope you enjoy =]
  3. kurenai

    kurenai Well-Known Member

    It's not terrible at all! I like the rhyme scheme. I say, write anything you want, if it makes you feel better.
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    Lovely poem, thanks for sharing! :heart:
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