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Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by me myself and i, Dec 14, 2010.

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  1. me myself and i

    me myself and i Account Closed

    I was a boy and you were a man
    I loved you so much, i was your fan
    I needed loving not pain and hurt
    Tugging quickly, undoing your shirt

    You stole my boyhood, i hope you are pleased
    Left in a ball, my soul now diseased
    Inside my mind i carry your sneer
    Inside my soul, the burden of fear

    Was it an illness or just evil lust?
    The new bike and toys, completely unjust
    The door now ajar and the stairs creaking, again
    As you pulled back the covers and started the pain


    I remember your death as i visit you grave
    Cold and alone, no longer to save
    The cycle is broken though not without pain
    One day in hell we will talk once, again
     
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    God Pete you write so well.
    Youwon't meet him ever again
    your hell was spent here you will be not go there not with him you will go straight to heaven if there is one
    take care and keep writing
     
  3. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    If there is a Hell, you will not be there I am sure...to us, you are heavenly...the other 29
     
  4. mulberrypie

    mulberrypie Well-Known Member

    heartbreaking. takes a lot of courage to get this out. you write so well! i hope you continue, pete x
     
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  5. Ravenwing

    Ravenwing Well-Known Member

    You can almost feel the pain in those words. That is a stunning piece of writing.
     
  6. Nataria

    Nataria Well-Known Member

    You're very skilled in writing Pete,I can feel the pain in it

    Thanks for sharing
     
  7. me myself and i

    me myself and i Account Closed

    frozen images.
     
  8. Ouroboros

    Ouroboros Chat Buddy

    :hug: pete you write so well and I hate that you hurt so, I wish I could express myself.
     
  9. me myself and i

    me myself and i Account Closed

    You would have been 93 last week.
     
  10. Terry

    Terry Antiquities Friend Staff Alumni

    May he rot!!
     
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