Hopeless Dilemma (for Beloved Dreamer - and all poets)

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  1. Hopeless Dilemma


    Witness to heavy words;
    Oh, the weariness of trying to be be heard
    while yet no solutions appear
    Weary in heart, and mind,
    when life can be so unkind,
    demanding blood from stone
    And we feel so alone
    and damned
    no matter the stand
    we take,
    no matter the choices we make;
    Dragged, beaten, into the arena
    of hopeless dilemma

    FAL1​
     
    Last edited: Dec 20, 2006
  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I like it, it's so true, so accurate.:sad:

    love,

    least
     
  3. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    wonderful words put together as if they are one... i enjoyed it so much...

    BP
     
  4. BelovedDreamer

    BelovedDreamer Well-Known Member

    Beautiful. And rings so true. That feeling of struggling helplessly against nothingness that demands everything.
     
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