Hour of Eternity

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  1. Almost_There

    Almost_There Active Member

    Hour of Eternity

    I know
    the reason I hide
    myself, my mind, in your eyes

    is all I believe
    in the hands of God, will I be recieved?

    My heart
    tells me it is a lie
    at the judgement gate, I will be denied

    My time
    on this earth so short
    such a waste..was full of hurt

    I cry
    And scream, what have I done?
    to be cast away from the Son

    "Your own
    fault", I listen as the whispers say
    "destroying yourself while other were there

    For You,
    And all you have done is brought them pain
    thats why you will never get in those heavenly gates

    you lost it when it was tested most
    gave up.., blind you were for losing hope"

    Im sorry
    But what can I possibly do?
    "Nothing" they say, and the darkness inside grew

    What now?
    I asked my demons all around
    silence..my path, myself will have to be found

    through nothing, I think i've been here before
    I then realize this is my heart, forever sore

    Where I am
    this nothing this closed black hole
    is me..merely me..my so called soul

    Alone, I am
    as I open my tear streaked eyes
    these nightmares..horrible but yet I know from which I cant hide

    It felt like eternity in that place
    is that it? is nothing forever my fate?..

    I look to my clock at my side
    only an hour it was, only an hour had gone by

    More..I think as
    I breath a sigh and curl up again
    how many more to go? how many more eternal hours till the end?
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    so sad so broken i hope you can continue to write to reach out for help. Depression is a very dark place with meds and treatment it doesn't have to be so dark or lonely A very good write from ones soul i hope your next poem reveals more hope.
  3. pit

    pit Well-Known Member

    Good rhythm & flow. I like it.

  4. 41021

    41021 Banned Member

    **hug** I hear you
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