How I Dreamed

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by L108935, Jan 30, 2010.

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  1. L108935

    L108935 Well-Known Member

    How I Dreamed

    I told you how I dreamed
    Dreaming of you thrilled my heart
    On my way to see you
    My lover, more than everything to me

    I told you how I dreamed
    Dreaming of finally seeing you
    Keeping you in my mind
    Kept me high above my life

    I told you how I dreamed
    I told you I loved you more than myself
    Only loved myself so I could love you more
    My life was nothing 'cause you were everything

    I told you how I dreamed
    Oh how I hoped and believed
    Depended on the day that we'd unite
    I'd fight through life of deathly desires

    I told you how I dreamed
    How you were my dream that came true
    Then the rain fell down and evaporated
    You woke me from the dream and back into the nightmare
     
  2. PerfectlyMurdered

    PerfectlyMurdered Well-Known Member

    I relate with your poem a lot... you did a good job at capturing the emotions, and the twist at the end.
     
  3. L108935

    L108935 Well-Known Member

    Thank you.
     
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