hurtful words

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by resistance, May 4, 2006.

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  1. resistance

    resistance Staff Alumni

    If I was to give in and say, 'yes you are right',
    Will you leave me alone?
    If I wasn't to argue and let you carry on yelling,
    will you get bored and give up?
    If I was to cry and let out my feelings,
    will you carry on screaming at me?
    If I was to run away and never be seen,
    Would you be mad at me more?
    The answer to these questions will always be yes.
    Nothing I do is good enough.
    I can never be the daughter you want me to be.
    I can never be the woman who will make you proud.
    I try my best to make you happy,
    to make you smile at least.
    And at times I achieve this but then you always get mad at me.
    I come home slightly late, forget to call you at a certain time.
    Brought the wrong food or didn't pay that bill.
    I suggest an alternative but no, it's never right.
    You then take off at the deep end and dig in that knife.
    Make me feel useless, a failure and a waste.
    Wanting to slice myself to get rid of negative energy within.
    Wishing I could get away, escape from everything.
    Away from the hurtful words I fear for every day.
  2. 'Have now sent 2 PMs that have not registered in my sent box - dunno why.
    Be that as it may, I'd replied that I really felt for you in your words. And hopefully it might help make you smile (even crookedly) to read a page back, my posted "For The Critics In Our Lives". Made me smile to write it several years back, and to post it, and maybe, you could use the sarcasm...

  3. resistance

    resistance Staff Alumni

    I recieved your PM about words, I replied to it. I don't understand why you can't send me PM's, my inbox isn't full. :(
    I will check out the critics in our lives now. :) :hug:
  4. ~CazzaAngel~

    ~CazzaAngel~ Staff Alumni

    :clap: :hug: GREAT POEM!!!!!!!!! :clap: :cheekkiss

  5. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member


    i know how you feel!!!

    Wonderfully written...

  6. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    :wow: Love it!
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