I donno... love?

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Hellfrost, Nov 11, 2011.

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  1. Hellfrost

    Hellfrost Well-Known Member

    Ok, this is mushy, this is the complete opposite of what you are used from me... but hey, I cannot help it. Im in love and this is how I express my feelings (which mostly means that I cannot express them to the woman I like which in turns means that you can expect a very depressed poem next.)

    I stand here just out of reach
    The love i feel for you will slowly leech
    Everything inside me and turn it into pain
    This love i feel for you will turn into vain.

    For weeks now i have been dreaming of you
    Unresponsive to my advances you left me feeling blue
    But i know that deep inside you feel the same
    These feelings i have for you i cannot tame

    Nothing i do will ever turn us into one
    But this love i feel for you cannot be undone
    I can only channel it into sorrow
    And yearn for a better tomorrow

    Hunny you don't know what you do to me
    Unable to escape this uncertainty
    Can you please let me know how you feel
    So i can embrace you or try to heal

    Nothing i say can make you change your mind
    The answer to this question you alone can find
    But trust me when i say that i will be
    There for you when you realize that we are meant to be

    Nothing i do will ever turn us into one
    But this love i feel for you cannot be undone
    I can only channel it into sorrow
    And yearn for a better tomorrow
     
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    well written hun one from the heart
     
  3. Hellfrost

    Hellfrost Well-Known Member

    embarrasing is more like it :p Donno why I posted this.
     
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