I don't know what to do anymore

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by A.SoNiC.boY, Oct 9, 2010.

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  1. A.SoNiC.boY

    A.SoNiC.boY Well-Known Member

    I'm out of ideas, over my head in the sea
    Of misery, lost and bent if not broken
    Oh a token of my gratitude, a flower
    A sour taste in my mouth I, I can hardly breath
    Feelings seethe, my face falls, it fails
    It entails, I've been derailed, thoughts of you
    That I love you, and I don't know what to do anymore ​
     
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    You are a wonderful poet and need to keep writing okay because your words say so much and in such a beautiful way.
     
  3. A.SoNiC.boY

    A.SoNiC.boY Well-Known Member

    Thank you. :) I wanted to try a new rhyming scheme, hope it turned out ok. :)
     
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