I feel fine anytime she's around me

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by immadeofrainbow, Aug 28, 2010.

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  1. immadeofrainbow

    immadeofrainbow Well-Known Member

    It’s 1994
    Im a kid and
    And your not even born
    Up in the sky I’m burning darkness
    Jumping to touch a black hole
    Thinking of things I won't know
    Everything undefined
    With all of this life behind me
    Waiting for you to find me
    The sound of your voice reminds me
    Of a place I've never been

    I can wait twenty years
    Will I wonder why I’m even here
    You hold my hand
    Under thoughts
    That shine above our heads
    Everything I want said
    I say to you silently
    With words that have lost their meaning
    And all I can do is wonder
    Who was I before this feeling
    All I can do is wait

    I go to see her when she doens't wake up
    It's the summertime
    Her face burns me
    Her youths impatience turns me
    A strict facade
    That sears my veins
    And ll I can do it wait
  2. L108935

    L108935 Well-Known Member

    I like this poem. Really deep subject.
  3. immadeofrainbow

    immadeofrainbow Well-Known Member

  4. pit

    pit Well-Known Member

    Speaks of dreaming and romantic yearning. Good stuff!

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