I feel so lonely

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Scars and Memories, Jun 1, 2009.

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  1. Scars and Memories

    Scars and Memories Account Closed

    I feel so lonely
    no one knows me
    I know you don't love me
    but can you please hug me?

    Can you feel me?
    I know you can't
    you could heal me
    but you don't understand

    What can I do?
    where can I go?
    all I need is you
    and I want you to know

    I need you right next to me
    if you leave me I will overdose on extacy
    or I could slit my wrist
    anyway, you get the gist
     
  2. Samsara

    Samsara Well-Known Member

    That's pretty brutal...who'se this for? Remember, you can only depend on yourself for happiness. Happiness comes from inside :)
     
  3. Scars and Memories

    Scars and Memories Account Closed

    What do you mean with brutal?:huh: sorry my english sucks:dry:
    but I guess it's for anyone. it's for YOU:love:
     
  4. Jack Rabbit

    Jack Rabbit Well-Known Member

    Scar, I can't agree that your English sucks. Your poetry denies it. I think underneath this poem lurks a dark ironic sense of humor.
     
  5. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Lovely poem :hug:
     
  6. Scars and Memories

    Scars and Memories Account Closed

    Really? that wasn't intended:huh: :lol!:

    Thanks Daisy:smile:
     
  7. Jack Rabbit

    Jack Rabbit Well-Known Member

    One thing I've learned writing is that a lot of stuff isn't intended. It just shows up.
    :poo:
    The meter seems to need a melody. Maybe a classical guitar...
     
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