i found my very first poem that i ever wrote. warningn triggering

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by painfulbliss, Aug 12, 2008.

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  1. painfulbliss

    painfulbliss Well-Known Member

    he grabs the razor
    and places it in his hands
    getting ready
    to go to that faraway land

    and many thoughts
    running through his head
    and all he wants
    is to be dead

    he puts it to his wrists
    watches as his blood flows red
    he sits and cries
    all alone on his bed

    now he relizes that
    his fate has been sealed
    he just wishes
    that he could be healed

    now everything is becoming dark
    as he relizes that its to late
    for death has left its markand
    he's doomed his own fate

    now as the time passes by
    all he does is sit there and lye
    for his last words were
    "goodbye cruel world goodbye"
  2. The_8th_Wonder

    The_8th_Wonder senior Member

    Wow... Im impressed very nicely written. It's always good when people put their emotions into their writings and that's what you did. When did you write this?
  3. painfulbliss

    painfulbliss Well-Known Member

    idk remember a while ago. i have lots more.
  4. innocencexisxlove

    innocencexisxlove Well-Known Member

    i love that poem.
    it's very very good, and moving..

    actually hits home sorta.

    thanks for sharing :hug:

  5. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    awesome poem hun :hug: :hug: :hug:
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