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I give up (peom)

Discussion in 'The Coffee House' started by wants2die, Apr 14, 2008.

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  1. wants2die

    wants2die Well-Known Member

    This isn't how I pictured my life
    thinking about death and wanting to die.
    I was happy and free like a kite
    or so I thought but its only a lie.

    It all started when I became a teen
    and life got confusing and I felt blue.
    everyone around you feels like their mean,
    but really, they are just ignoring you.

    On the outside I smiled a lot
    but inside I frowned more.
    I couldn't really connect the dots,
    what was I living for?

    Sometimes I would picture myself dying
    and it actually would calm me down.
    You still reading this, you think I'm lying?
    I feel like I was beat into the ground.

    I lie awake at night thinking it through
    if killing myself would be wrong.
    Do you know what its like to feel blue,
    do you think I'm just singing a sad song?

    Well tonight is the night you will see
    I sit here telling you this as I cry
    go on, leave, forget about me
    because tonight is the night I will die.

    The end!
  2. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

  3. *dilligaf*

    *dilligaf* Staff Alumni

  4. Witty_Sarcasm

    Witty_Sarcasm Eccentric writer, general weirdo, heedless heathen

    good poem, I can relate to it
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