I hardly ever post poetry... O_o

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Dragon, Sep 20, 2007.

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  1. Dragon

    Dragon Staff Alumni

    The Rave

    the stale stench of sweat,
    clinging to hot, supple bodies
    covered in beer and soda.

    elbows in ribs
    that'll hurt in the morning

    hold tight to the rail
    don't lose your place
    push back
    a death grip

    music thumps
    feel it through the soles of your shoes
    (if you still have them)

    one body
    one mind
    jump and jump
    sing your heart out
  2. honsou

    honsou Well-Known Member

    Wow i really really liked this poem, so original =). Its really refreshing to read something like this.
  3. Damian_H

    Damian_H Well-Known Member

    I agree, I don't usually like poetry, somthing about that though. It was good :)
  4. Spearmint

    Spearmint Well-Known Member

    Reminds me of a show..I like it. :clap:
  5. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    Good poem :hug:
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