i hate you (may trigger)

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by FoReVeR LoSt, Dec 20, 2006.

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  1. FoReVeR LoSt

    FoReVeR LoSt Well-Known Member

    You look at me like I’m the freak
    You look at me like I am weak
    You called the cops and now look
    I’m hanging here from this hook

    You brought this on and don’t u lie
    You promised me, so tell me why
    My heart was racing when I heard the bell
    Now I’m stuck in my own personal hell

    The four cops standing there with their light
    I wish I would’ve had the strength to fight
    To run away from all the pain and stress
    To leave behind my little mess

    I sat in that little white room staring
    Thanks for not fucking caring
    I should’ve taken the pills when I was alone
    Like you would’ve known

    They let me go you know
    They didn’t care that I was low
    I’m going to do it again, but this time I’ll succeed
    I won’t even have time to bleed
  2. twilight

    twilight Well-Known Member

    Very good. But I wish you didn't feel this way.

    Please take care and thanks for the poem :hug:
  3. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I like the poem:smile: , tho not the feelings that inspired it.:sad: HOpe you are feeling better soon. I care!:smile:


  4. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    wonderful poem... and the emotion is great in it...

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