I Hate...

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by FoundAndLost1, Mar 10, 2007.

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  1. I hate…
    Myself
    My body
    My age
    My chores and bills
    My small apartment and
    the rain hitting the railings on the balcony
    like Chinese water torture
    My finances
    My family (all 2 that are left)
    My drugs (all 10)
    My poems
    Food
    My addled, overwhelmed brain
    This world
    This life
    God

    I used to love…
    My soul
    Winter
    Writing
    Sunsets
    Cool breezes
    Cooking
    Music
    Art
    Reading
    Crafting
    Thinking
    Life
    The Universe
    My imagination
    Knowledge
    Asking
    Seeking
    Finding

    But I don’t give a shit
    anymore

    I miss…
    caring about life
    But it’s stolen from me
    all there was…
    piece by piece

    FAL1
     
    Last edited: Mar 10, 2007
  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    You express your despair unbearably well...

    love,

    least
     
  3. Thank you

    But this poem so sucks

    They're just simple,
    sorry words
    strung together
    like miss-matched,
    free-water pearls


    FAL1
     
  4. Entropy

    Entropy Well-Known Member

    It is how they are strung together, and you string them together... beautifully.

    As a whole they are just as beautiful as anything else.

    Does it take an expert biologist spending time, money and energy carefully cultivating pearls to make a work of art? The answer is no, a caveman on a beach can find a few and pick the best.
     
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