I hate...

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by theshark1019, Dec 3, 2007.

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  1. theshark1019

    theshark1019 Member

    wrote this in about 5 minutes a little while ago. posted in on myspace first, and now here. What do you think?

    I hate walking on the beach in the evening, wading in the water up to my knees
    I hate looking over the railing on a cruise ship into the sea, feeling its salty breeze
    I hate staring at a starry sky, watching from the roof on a warm summer's night
    I hate the colors of a sun setting on the horizon, in awe of the fiery sight.
    I hate hiking up long winding trails, up to the highest peak.
    I hate theme parks, passing by the coasters, hearing the riders shriek.
    I hate living in a world that rarely gives but will always take
    I hate living in this world and just need a break.

    Dont ya love multiple meanings? lol
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