i just find this place

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by jane doe, Dec 8, 2006.

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  1. jane doe

    jane doe Well-Known Member

    i wrote something and i think i put it in the wrong place, now i find this place i´ll put it again. i have a few more and i´ll put them too.

    waiting for the end
    i came looking for hope
    looking for someone
    who can understand my feelings
    and i found you
    so lost like me
    you listened to me
    and you gave me what i needed.
    i haven´t met you yet
    and you almost don´t know nothing about me
    but you were there
    and no matter what
    i´ll be there for you too
    now i feel i know you
    and that we are friends
    and friends shouldn´t be alone
    i´ll hang on, if you hang on
    and if you´r sad, i´ll cry with you
    i´ll be there as longer as you stay with me
    because you are too much for me right now
    i won´t let you go
    stay beside me and let´s make this friendship works
    i know you´re hurt
    i won´t do that to you
    and if your desition is to go away
    i´ll go away with you
    __________________________________________________ ______
    i wrote it all so i hope you enjoy it.
  2. Welcome to the Poet's Corner. Good you found this spot. Your thoughts are very loving. I hope it helps you to share here. I know it helps me...

  3. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I like it very much!!:smile: :smile:

  4. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    that is such a beautifully written poem...

    you got some skill... hope to read more soon...

    Love BP
  5. jane doe

    jane doe Well-Known Member

    thank you:)
  6. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    you are so welcome hun...
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