I Love You

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by MoAnamCara, Jun 3, 2012.

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  1. MoAnamCara

    MoAnamCara SF Artist

    I Love You

    I'm being honest,
    Just trust me.
    All will be okay
    Because I love you.

    Give me what I want,
    What I say I need.
    I only ask
    Because I love you.

    I know I’m right,
    With what I say.
    I tell you
    Because I love you.

    Doesn’t that feel good,
    Or how about this?
    I’m trying to please you
    Because I love you.

    I only act this way,
    Say these things.
    I’m trying to help you
    Because I love you.

    I’m sorry you are messed up,
    My problems are your fault.
    I wanted you to know
    Because I love you.

    Come back,
    I’m sorry.
    I only acted that way
    Because I love you.
  2. MoAnamCara

    MoAnamCara SF Artist


    Teardrops for
    A life changed.
    An internal pain
    That never ceases.

    A soul mate gone
    Wanting to feel their touch.
    Alas, no more.

    A wondrous person
    Most didn’t understand.
    Who would give their life
    For those they cherished.

    The last breaths
    Deep, hard – gut wrenching.
    Did they hear
    As I whispered in their ear?

    Could they see
    As I fell to my knees?
    As I banged the floor
    In despair?

    Were they watching
    Over their casket?
    As my tears fell
    Upon the oak?

    Have they seen my grief
    And my distress?
    It runs so deep
    Because they were my all.

    Many more tears fall
    For what’s lost.
    For what’s gone
    And what will never be.

    My air,
    My life-force,
    My keeper,
  3. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    Again, your work is so talented and so sad...I cannot imagine what you are going through, but want to remind you I am here for the little respite I can provide
  4. IV2010

    IV2010 Well-Known Member

  5. 1Lefty

    1Lefty Well-Known Member

    I like them, you can tell good writing when you can tell it comes from the deep place
  6. MoAnamCara

    MoAnamCara SF Artist

    The Spiral

    One fleeting thought.
    A memory
    Or a feeling
    And it starts.

    Or consciously,
    The outcome is
    The same.

    A desire to disappear.
    To be able to breath,
    To have the fear

    Instead it escalates.
    And increases wishes of escape,
    The dreams of floating away,

    A blade beckons.
    To calm and to sooth,
    A brief respite
    In the eye of the storm.

    Why the need for this mode
    Of coping,
    When the results
    Only increase self loathing?

    And so the spiral continues.
    A vicious, unrelenting cycle.
    A faraway dream of peace
    Appears truly unattainable.
  7. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    Again such talent...wish it was not in the service of you feeling this way...although, completely understandablel...many hugs
  8. Acy

    Acy Mama Bear - TLC, Common Sense Staff Member Safety & Support

    You have a way with words...and with your photos. Trust the universe to help you heal. It will. You will. :arms:
  9. IV2010

    IV2010 Well-Known Member

    such beautiful but sad words Mo..:console:
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