i tried....

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by mitty, Feb 8, 2014.

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  1. mitty

    mitty Member

    Whilst sat there under clouds of gloom
    locked secure in my darkened room

    Building in my stomach the knot begins to tighten
    the fruit of my anger starts to ripen

    anger building within these walls
    they crumble with a mighty rawr

    silence, my eyes open.. light
    last time they opened it was night...

    it was not real, it was but a dream
    within myself i heard the scream.
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Wow hun your words your poem state how much pain you in. you should write more it helps it really helps to get rid of some of that pain inside
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