I wanted to share this with all of you...

Discussion in 'Suicidal Thoughts and Feelings' started by Perishable, Nov 13, 2007.

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  1. Perishable

    Perishable Well-Known Member

    As I was skimming through the varies poetry sites...Just surfing the web to satisfy and feed my boredom... I found a poem that I found simply...so...Just well worded. It made me feel better. Out of all the poems I read that sounded like complaining to me...This one was more 'me'. Just something that eased my pain of my life and let my suicidal thoughts diminish to a lower aspect of hurt for a moment of two...

    Here it is...

    Warped & Twisted
    by Skittles

    Harsh words & violent blows
    Hidden secrets nobody knows
    Eyes are open, hands are fisted
    Deep inside I'm warped & twisted
    So many tricks & so many lies
    Too many whens & too many whys
    Nobody's special, nobody's gifted
    I'm just me, warped & twisted
    Sleeping awake & choking on a dream
    Listening loudly to a silent scream
    Call my mind, the number's unlisted
    Lost in someone so warped & twisted
    On my knees, alive but dead
    Look at the invisible blood I've bled
    I'm not gone, my mind has drifted
    Don't expect much, I'm warped & twisted
    Burnt out, wasted, empty, & hollow
    Today's just yesterday's tomorrow
    The sun died out, the ashes sifted
    I'm still here, warped & twisted
  2. Speaking out

    Speaking out Member

    well it's not a bad read i use to sit on the net reading poems about suicide, love, life and all that shit. most times i would walk away crying but yea sometimes you can come over something that you can really relate too....

    hope your well.
  3. Perishable

    Perishable Well-Known Member

    Yea. You do come across some good ones.
    Do you have any you find most interesting? :wink:
  4. Perishable

    Perishable Well-Known Member

    why did I post this? :tongue:
  5. itmahanh

    itmahanh Senior Member & Antiquities Friend

    I like it, thanks!
  6. Pensive

    Pensive Well-Known Member

    Yeah its really nicely written, glad you shared it :)
  7. pit

    pit Well-Known Member

    Very inspirational. I used to write a lot years ago. These days, I'm uninspired.
  8. Dave_N

    Dave_N Guest

    Cool poem perishable. Thanks for posting it.
  9. Perishable

    Perishable Well-Known Member

    lol... thx, I thought it was relative, something to gawk at.
  10. famous.last.words

    famous.last.words Forum Buddy

    its very interesting, thank you :)
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