I wonder...

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by A.SoNiC.boY, Aug 12, 2011.

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  1. A.SoNiC.boY

    A.SoNiC.boY Well-Known Member

    I wonder...
    Is sleeping the cousin of death.
    When I die, will I dream forever?
    If suicide is the answer under my breath
    Of how I wish to pass into eternal sleep,
    Barring a better way, a better escape.
    We all know how death can creep,
    Up on you while you sleep.
    I wonder if love is the answer
    To all my questions
    To all my fears
    Oh dear,
    Is it you who will save me, from myself?
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I wonder very good poem hun I hope love can and will come to save you
    I do hope love of self come as well hun hugs
  3. absolution

    absolution Forum Buddy

    That's really beautifully written. It gave me chills. Good job!

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