I wrote this some years ago... A young girls broken heart

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  1. Cherry

    Cherry Member

    Have you ever cried so hard,
    that you couldn't breathe,
    have you ever had someone stab you in the back,
    and laugh as they watch you bleed?
    have you ever loved someone so much, but they never understood?
    have you ever been abused for being bad,
    when you were trying so hard to be good?
    have yo ever cried a billion tears,
    asking God "why?",
    and do you know how it feels to fall asleep at night,
    wishing you would die?
    have you ever had man threaten to take your life,
    and you try not to show your fear,
    but it hurts too bad to hide?
    have you ever thought you could trust someone, but they just throw you around,
    and you try so hard to hold back the tears, as you hit the ground?
    have you ever struggled so bad you had to become a *****?
    have you ever overdosed on drugs,
    because you just couldn't take anymore?
    do you really know what it feels like,
    to have your heart get burned?
    have you ever left your house,
    unsure if you'll return?
    have you ever looked to the stars at night,
    and prayed for the pain to end?
    begging please just take it away,
    and the next day you feel it again?
    have you ever told yourself to hold on,
    please don't fall apart
    have you ever really listened,
    to a young girl's broken heart?
    do yo know how hard it is,
    for me to face another day?
    if you don't then tell me why,
    you treat me this way?
    have you ever felt the pain i have,
    do you know how i feel?
    have you ever think about your past,
    and just wished it wasn't real?
    have you ever been face to face with rape,
    and you can't pull away?
    do you know how it feels when you can't move,
    you just let him have his way?
    and you can't think, can't even breathe,
    don't even get a chance to fight,
    and everytime you think about that night,
    all you wanna do is cry...
    have you ever watched your mom,
    fall further and further away from your kiss?
    and you wonder why it had to be her,
    why is life like this?
    have you ever screamed for help,
    wishing someone would hear?
    but no one hears your cries,
    no one sees your tears...
    have you ever been through,
    all the things i've been through?
    if you haven't then tell me why,
    you treat me like you do...
     
  2. youRprecious!

    youRprecious! Antiquities Friend

    This poem is AMAZING Cherry, well done and welcome to SF. Do hope that you're feeling better since you wrote of these experiences hun. I love your signature too - says it all, really :) So, welcome :rainbow:
     
  3. Cherry

    Cherry Member

    Thank you very much. Yes felt good to share this after so long!!! Don't suppose it's so,etching you can just put on Facebook lol

    Well just joining today gave me something to focus on rather than feeling numb. Like a little project getting to know a new website etc. we all have our vices I suppose!
     
  4. youRprecious!

    youRprecious! Antiquities Friend

    SF can be a very helpful focus - I do hope that is what everyone finds it to be who joins up. Look forward to reading more of your stuff, you are very talented :)
     
  5. Twocky61

    Twocky61 Banned Member

    Thankyou for sharing Cherry

    I will answer your moving poem with this:

    While you scream at your woman, there's a man wishing he could whisper in her ear.

    While you humiliate, offend & insult her, there's a man flirting with her & reminding her how beautiful she is.

    While you hurt her, there's a man wishing he could take her pain away.

    While you make her cry, there's a man stealing smiles from her.

    This & your poem Cherry affect me because Claire suffered serious domestic abuse at the hands of her ex

    I still want to kill the *** but Claire refuses to identify him for me as she says what would be the point? as he is out of her life now, she feels safe at last with me and what would be the point of my serving mandatory life?

    So of course it would really be closure for me

    When we first met at a truckstop after she finally ran & phoned me to pick her up we booked into a motel room & I asked her to show me. Shyly she did so. her body was covered in bruises and rope marks. Of course he was clever enough not to beat her where her injuries could be seen. What he subjected her to I will not go into but suffice to say she daily feared for her life believing it was her last.

    As I type this Claire is sat next to me & is ok (she says) about me sharing this. But even so I will leave it there

    So again:

    While you scream at your woman, there's a man wishing he could whisper in her ear.

    While you humiliate, offend & insult her, there's a man flirting with her & reminding her how beautiful she is.

    While you hurt her, there's a man wishing he could take her pain away.

    While you make her cry, there's a man stealing smiles from her.

    I hope you are safe now too Cherry. Next bit from Claire:

    I escaped Cherry so if you have not already then pack your bags and flee to someone you trust. I did & I am free now. You must do the same. Don't think you love him. I made that mistake thinking I could change him. But of course once a bastard always a bastard.
    Do it now Cherry I implore you. Also anyone else reading this must do the same
    Claire xXx

    :freehug: :grouphug: :butterfly048: :rainbow:
     
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  6. Cherry

    Cherry Member

    What if there is no one else in the world though? Thank you for your kind comments xx
     
  7. Twocky61

    Twocky61 Banned Member

    Why would there be no one else in the world?
     
  8. Cherry

    Cherry Member

    Just sometimes there isn't.
     
  9. Twocky61

    Twocky61 Banned Member

    I suppose you are right Cherry when you feel alone & depressed - I have Claire; I hope you have someone too :hug: :hug: :hug:
     
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