I wrote this when I was younger

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by smackh2o, Apr 27, 2007.

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  1. smackh2o

    smackh2o SF Supporter

    I just found this. I feel like posting it but I dont really know why...

    My depression is unlimited through tears that meander my cheeks
    I have no love for me and no love for them
    My heart burns to join suit, to have feelings deep
    But feeling of decay and ash, is all I really seek
    And even now when explaining my toil
    I know I cannot be as a pair can be
    For I can only hope, and procrastinate my life
    Till every ounce of fight has left my wretched body
    And left myself a cowering recessive
    Of a form I long to be without
    The world is a lonely place, for a mind like mine
    And solitude is compulsive, but for love I still pine
  2. Blackness

    Blackness Guest

    That's so good, so deep too
  3. ~CazzaAngel~

    ~CazzaAngel~ Staff Alumni

    :clap: :cry: That was really good.
  4. smackh2o

    smackh2o SF Supporter

    Cheers :shy:
  5. ~CazzaAngel~

    ~CazzaAngel~ Staff Alumni

    :hug: Thanks for sharing it with us.
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