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Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by carbon monoxide perfume, Aug 31, 2007.

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  1. This city is killing my slowly...
    These peoples voices are making me deaf...
    Their beliefs are making me blind...

    Slowly becoming infected;
    Into a statue society molded me to;
    I harden with your values inside;

    Only time can tell what I will become...
    Only time can make me crack and crumble...
    Only time can stop the infection...

    This is who I am!
    You cannot change what I became!
    I hope your happy with what you created!
    A lost soul trying to break free!

    Lost inside trying to figure out who I really am;
    Am I just a ghost walking the world?
    Does anyone notice me?
  2. Darkness N Light

    Darkness N Light Staff Alumni

    Wow!!! I don't really know what to say about your poem. It has emotion and it is deep. Also some of the words you used are powerful. I am sorry if that is how you are feeling. I am here if you need to talk. Take care and I love you. :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss

    With Love,
    Crystal :hug: :cheekkiss
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