If I had one more~~

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by TLA, Oct 7, 2007.

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  1. TLA

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    A poem: IF I HAD ONE MORE~
    If I had one more morning, I’d watch you lying there.
    If I had one more chance, I’d take my pills and be healthy.
    If I had one more afternoon, I’d walk with my hand in yours to show everyone how wonderful you are, how proud I am to be with you.
    If I had one more evening, I’d play with my child until he was exhausted.
    If I had one more dollar, I’d buy gas to travel to be close to you.
    If I had one more invitation, I’d try to learn your computer game.
    If I had one more sunset, I’d rest my head on your shoulder to feel all is right in the world, say ‘I care for you and feel safe in your presence’.
    If I received one more hug, I’d cherish it and hug you back closely.
    If I had one more car ride, I’d laugh, and smile while you drove.
    If I had one more meal, I’d want it to be at a steakhouse that you loved.
    If I had one more night, I’d spend it laying on a pillow talking to you.
    If I had one more kiss, I’d pray it was your lips I touch.
     
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