If I May...

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by A.SoNiC.boY, Aug 24, 2011.

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  1. A.SoNiC.boY

    A.SoNiC.boY Well-Known Member

    If I May...

    If I may be blunt, I truly do hate,
    Everything about myself. Oh but wait!
    Certain loss of faith, in me will proceed,
    When I Confide, that I'll never succeed.

    If I may be candid, I am nothing much,
    Just a hack and a loser, and all things such.
    Run and hide, look away, pretend your a stranger,
    Cause your future is ripe with success, I would wager.

    If I may be honest, just for a minute,
    My mind is broken, not much within it,
    That is right, that is good, that is worth it at all.
    Soon you will realize, my potential is too small.

    That's it, I quit.
    I'm not worth shit.​
  2. texaskitty

    texaskitty SF Friend and Antiquities Friend Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    Beautiful. *blows nose*
  3. Speedy

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  4. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Nice write hun but i don't agree you do matter hun you are special hugs
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