If I wrote

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by thedeafmusician, Oct 29, 2006.

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  1. thedeafmusician

    thedeafmusician Staff Alumni

    Dedicated to all the pricks at school that dare to label me... it aint that great a poem if you can call it one... but I need to let it out before I explode at the people in question.

    If I write about dying
    I’d be labelled goth
    If I write about sorrow
    I’d be labelled emo
    If I write about boys
    I’d be labelled prep
    And it would be boring and prolly shallow anyway

    If I write about love
    I’d be labelled a slut
    If I write about relaxing
    I’d be labelled lazy
    If I write about happiness
    It’d be accepted
    But you can’t touch people with happiness

    If I write about nature
    I’d be labelled hippie
    If I write about technology
    I’d be labelled a geek
    If I write about survival
    It’d mean I’m a fighter
    But I can’t give myself a label like that – I’m not

    So with all that said
    I may as well write nothing at all
    Does that satisfy you now?
    No, I didn’t think so either
    You lot are never satisfied
    You don’t know what you’ve got
    Until you don’t have it anymore
    I just hope you don’t learn it the hard way
     
  2. Yep - damned if you do - damned if you don't...

    I think it's a fine dialogue of a poem

    FAL1
     
  3. ~CazzaAngel~

    ~CazzaAngel~ Staff Alumni

    That's a very good poem....and it's true with a lot of things you can't win for losing.....:dry: take care hun....:hug:
     
  4. ACRon

    ACRon Well-Known Member

    I liked that, you should do what comes naturally, atleast then your fighting for something you believe in. life will run its natural course:smile:
     
  5. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I like it also, it's a very good poetic:smile: response to some real jerks!:mad:

    least
     
  6. thedeafmusician

    thedeafmusician Staff Alumni

    Thanks guys... :grouphug:

    TDM
     
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