If It Stops

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by PhoenixBurning, Feb 27, 2015.

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  1. PhoenixBurning

    PhoenixBurning New Member

    If it stops, I don’t think I’d mind/it’s fine/if it stops why the hell would I mind/it’s time/tremble in the cold but I won’t go in/there’s an orange light out there where I aim my eyes/mostly my mind won’t do anything but spin/mostly my heart only recalls goodbyes/If it stops I don’t think I’d mind/it’s fine/if it stops why the hell would I mind/it’s time/is anyone really liked anyway?/orange light gets brighter then dies/is anything what anybody meant to say?/maybe it’s not so bad/because I can still feel the light in my eyes/If it stops I don’t think I’d mind/it’s fine/if it stops why the hell would I mind/it’s time/maybe I think it’s a crime/to get something that mends/then feel it sever me again/to know it’s not real/yet still grasp and feel/for what wasn’t even there/for who never even cared/light is going out in my eyes/but my, my, my I had some beautiful goodbyes/It’s going to stop/and I think it’s fine/
     
  2. deb22

    deb22 Well-Known Member

    Well this was written with some pretty deep feelings as I have tears in my eyes just reading it. I for one am moved by the writing and the theme. I wish I did not understand it but I really really do. Good job on the writing of this but I hope the sadness subsides.
     
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