if you just started or you want to..

Discussion in 'Self Harm & Substance Abuse' started by jane doe, Mar 31, 2008.

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  1. jane doe

    jane doe Well-Known Member

    you should read this poem i wrote 2 years after starting hurting myself(andit`s gotten worse now)

    natural as breathing
    simple like the snow
    You´ve taken everything
    that once, belong to me
    You are always present in my thoughts
    and I, a fool who doesn´t understand anything
    i dedicated my entire life to you
    and that´s the way i knew you woud answer my call
    taking away everithing from me
    taking away everyone who ever loved me
    taking away...who i used to be
    and you left only a shadow
    of the happy woman i was once
    and this shadow
    walks lonely, drawning itself on tears
    this shadow is, may be, the memory of me
    but i just know
    this shadow wants the moon comes out
    so it can rest in peace at last

    i hope you understand what i meant to say:wink:
  2. thedudeabides

    thedudeabides Active Member

    im bad at poetry but i liked it.
  3. magz74

    magz74 Well-Known Member

    exactly the way i feel.u poem is very good
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