If you tried.

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Shadowplay, Apr 21, 2007.

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  1. Shadowplay

    Shadowplay Staff Alumni

    I think this is my best work to date. :blink:

    -If you tried.-

    I’m on my way back,
    To where I come from.
    All the way back,
    To when I was young.
    Innocence been lost,
    Faded as I’ve grown.
    All the things I’ve lost,
    Everything I’ve known.

    IF YOU TRIED!
    IF YOU TRIED!
    IF YOU TRIED!


    I could be anything,
    At least that’s what they say.
    I could be anyone,
    Fit in everyday.
    But the worlds a scary place,
    Even when I fly.
    I’m no good at anything,
    So why even try?

    IF YOU TRIED!
    IF YOU TRIED!
    IF YOU TRIED!


    [SOLO]

    I’m on my way back,
    To where I come from.
    All the way back,
    To when I was young.
    Innocence been lost,
    Faded as I’ve grown.
    All the things I’ve lost,
    Everything I’ve known.

    IF YOU TRIED!
    IF YOU TRIED!
    IF YOU TRIED!


    IF YOU TRI-I-I-I-IED!

    If you tried.
    If you tried.
    If you tried.

    If you tri-i-i-i-ied.

    basically my entire life I've been told how much better I should be doing, and how well I'd do if I would try, thats what this is about.
     
  2. ~PinkElephants~

    ~PinkElephants~ Senior member

    first off :hug:

    secondly...that was really really really good. I want to hear it whne you record it.
     
  3. Shadowplay

    Shadowplay Staff Alumni

  4. ~PinkElephants~

    ~PinkElephants~ Senior member

    i LOVE it. LOVE it
     
  5. SmilePretty

    SmilePretty Staff Alumni

    omg kurt it is amazing. i love the lyrics so so so much. and i liked the recording :) it is really good.
     
  6. Vitreledonellidae

    Vitreledonellidae Well-Known Member

    Ok am I that retarded that I can find the download button :unsure: So someone tell me how :tongue:
    Anyway I really love it, its one of my favourites now. And maybe you could be anything or everyone, just do what you want, you're already wonderfull, beautifull, amazing, I love you just the way you are. And i think lots of people think the same.
    :hug:
     
  7. Shadowplay

    Shadowplay Staff Alumni

  8. ~PinkElephants~

    ~PinkElephants~ Senior member

    Second recording is definitely alot better. I love your voice alot Kurt, keep up the good work :hug:
     
  9. Spearmint

    Spearmint Well-Known Member

    It's really good.
     
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