I'll miss you.. even on my dying day

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  1. brokenandlonely

    brokenandlonely Well-Known Member

    This poem is written is from the heart for a close friend
    The memories that we have shared will never end
    I remember details and memories as if they were just yesterday
    In my heart is where all these words and feelings will forever stay
    I know that soon, i'll be able to join you up above
    For you will be safe my friend, i've got lots of love
    In reality, i've got a big hole in my heart
    I've got so much pain, I don't even know where to start
    I still can't believe that you're gone
    I lost a close friend and your parents well they lost a son
    If this is something that you can hear, I'm missing you
    By sharing my feelings here, I'm getting chills. Is that a clue?
    With you being in my heart, you are close and we'll never be apart
    You spread your wings and flew free
    Someday soon we'll meet again
    But for now, I know that you are in a good place
    Everytime I close my eyes, I can see your face
    With a smile, from heaven
    Everything is fine, is the words that I hear

    With all these thoughts, I'm facing my dying day
    I just got the news that even my life is on the limit
    Doctor slowly walks in the room and the words are a blur
    Only thing I hear
    "This is it. Sorry to say this, but there's not much time left
    What was bugging you and killing you well that was death.
    You have only six months, so don't fear
    Take this medicine, at the most it will slow it down to a year."
    I ask the doc, "how could this be? You must have the wrong person
    You see, do you really think i need this medicine?
    I'm so young, I still have a handful of years to live so
    I'm not giving up, it's not my time to go."
    "Sorry to say son, it's the cycle of life
    Where the good die young, but the bad survive."
    Life after death, will be my happy life in eternity
    Life in heaven will be better you see.
    The room was silent, there wasn't a sound
    My tears wouldn't stop streaming down.
    I wish there was something I could do, turn the hands of time
    I couldn't stop thinking, I was so lost in my mind
    With my head down, walking slow to my home
    How do I break the news, in a year I'll be gone.

    The story I have shared, was a year ago
    Everything since then, has been sad and full of sorrow
    My body is weak, I'm feeling really ill
    Everyone full of worry, this is the reason why I have to check back here
    Now I'm laying alone in a hospital bed
    Tears won't stop, I'm facing my death
    Family is surrounding me, eyes full of tears
    I can see the look in their eyes, as I can see the fear
    The time is near, have to be strong and need to put on a smile
    I didn't deserve this, I didn't do any wrong
    I pretend i'm not afraid of dying
    But if I really have to go then i'm going out smiling
    To show, that I appreciate the life I was given
    I'm having a hard time of breathing
    I can't fight it....I'm giving up
    I think my heart is about to stop
    I hear everyones voice, don't go it's not your time
    The only response I have is, don't worry, in the end i'll be fine
    The last sight, a bright light is all i can see from above
    I'll leave you with my last words
    I'll miss you, with lots of love.
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  2. xXxRNBxXx

    xXxRNBxXx Senior member

    aww harry hunny *i lvoe you so much* xxxx
  3. cownes

    cownes Well-Known Member

    :eek:hmy: that is amazing :hug: keep up the hard work!!
  4. Sa Palomera

    Sa Palomera Well-Known Member

    wow, intense Harry.

    And damn good.

  5. TheOncomingStorm

    TheOncomingStorm Well-Known Member

    Harry, you has amazing talent. Im jealous lol..Keep it up!
  6. Landlocked blues

    Landlocked blues Well-Known Member

    you have a real talent, keep it up :smile: amazing poem
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