I'll Take Pain

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Acy, Jun 25, 2008.

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  1. Acy

    Acy Mama Bear - TLC, Common Sense Staff Member Safety & Support

    I'll Take Pain

    Death would be
    the ultimate

    But I'll take pain
    to furthermore
    remind me
    that I wish
    that I were...

  2. The_Discarded

    The_Discarded Staff Alumni

    Succinct, demonstrative. I'd imagine it conveys what many feel.

    Very nice.

  3. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I can identify with this one a lot.:sad:
  4. HappyAZaClaM

    HappyAZaClaM Guest

  5. itmahanh

    itmahanh Senior Member & Antiquities Friend

    Acy, concise and to the point. This one really spoke to me hun. Why havent you? You arent alone Acy, please reach out for the hand that is dangling there for you.
  6. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

  7. pit

    pit Well-Known Member

    I can digg it. I'm in that state of mind right now.
  8. fromthatshow

    fromthatshow Staff Alumni

    anticipating death is something at least
    be well :hug:
  9. Spearmint

    Spearmint Well-Known Member

    Wow. Excellent piece of writing. :hug:
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