I'll trade you for the NUMB

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by A.SoNiC.boY, Aug 1, 2013.

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  1. A.SoNiC.boY

    A.SoNiC.boY Well-Known Member

    I'LL TRADE YOU FOR THE NUMB

    And then it crashes down. smashing into you brain like a tidal-wave of angst
    everything thing you've been pushing to the back of your mind rushes to the front
    enough to make you dizzy
    Your screaming in you head that wish you were dead,
    Cause if you speak one word you'll really wish you were
    sinking lower and lower, drowning in your wasted years, and sub-par life.
    because you know you could and should have been more than you are now
    nothing else can compare to the despair or knowing just what you are

    A fucking low life scum-sucking SL*T, a god damn liar, you suck and leach,
    just a drain on all that is around you
    a fucking black star, sucking the good and life out of everything around you
    but only for a brief bit.

    and then you OK once again.
    but these, these are the moments when suicide is once again a VERY real option
    and you feel even worse than ever, because you promised
    that you'd never kill yourself
    these are the moments. when you just might go too far
    and never ever come back.

    I'll trade you for you numbness, any day of the week.
    Cause I feel fucking EVERYTHING.
     
  2. ub3

    ub3 Banned Member

    Wow .....? what can i say...? you said it all in your poem Jesus ...talent in latin means heavy burden and you have that without a shadow of a doubt please keep writing i resonate with what you have to share...thankyou for putting into words how i feel....shit sucks
     
  3. LostInMyDaydreams

    LostInMyDaydreams Well-Known Member

    Your poetry is very powerful and moving.
    Excellent writing! Thank you for sharing this!
     
  4. pancake111

    pancake111 Well-Known Member

    I really like your poetry. You're very blunt and honest with what you're saying. I really like that in poetry.
     
  5. badassunicorn

    badassunicorn Member

    "I'll trade you for you numbness, any day of the week.
    Cause I feel fucking EVERYTHING. "

    I particularly like this line. Very powerful.
     
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