illusion

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  1. ari

    ari Staff Alumni

    the want is here even before it was begun
    there is the illusion that we may be
    two understanding such needs
    a stolen moment is what was taken
    years, i studied your eyes
    they shine, with kindness in thine
    looking for an affirmation
    intelligance is the core of your heart, not the whole of it
    empathy is a seed that you let flow into others
    this stolen moment shouldnt have been
    I will make you feel better, I will soothe you soul
    you needn't worry, my heart won't break,
    this alone will not break it...
    if something like this would break it, i would have been broken long ago
    drawbacks of being so strong .. people cant see the flaws, the fragility
    i wanted you to hear the poetic.. i wanted you to hear, because no one ever truly hears me...
    or looks beyond what they want to see
    my thoughts are spilling out onto this page
    as my tears wipe them away
    i told you that in life its ok to steal moments,
    that sometimes thats all you have,
    that in the sometimes it is what people need
    another piece of my heart broke and fell into the bottom of my soul
    but this i did not tell you
    alone I am in the illusions of ever more
     
  2. gentlelady

    gentlelady Staff Alumni

    Beautiful hun. As always. :hug:
     
  3. ari

    ari Staff Alumni

    thanks hun...no matter what your words of support for my words mean so much to me...ari
     
  4. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    "...my thoughts are spilling out onto this page
    as my tears wipe them away..."

    Beautiful Ari:smile: :smile: , I especially love the two lines quoted above!:smile: :smile: :smile:

    love,

    least
     
  5. ari

    ari Staff Alumni

    thanks sweetie, actually wrote this the other night...alot of it was taken from an actual conversation that I had with someone...that I let my guard down with. ari
     
  6. "thanks sweetie, actually wrote this the other night...alot of it was taken from an actual conversation that I had with someone... that I let my guard down

    That came through so strongly in the poem - but you did it with great grace. Your words are beautiful

    FAL1
     
    Last edited: Sep 26, 2006
  7. ari

    ari Staff Alumni

    thanks hun...your words are a salve upon my soul...:hug:

    in addition to the illusion
    what may be and what really is
    The guard slips,
    my heart gasps, the thousand purple breaths of fear
    the tears that slide in the hiding
    divide and conquer within
    the flaws of the human chasmed in the rawness of humility
    floundering in the aloneness
    opens the door a bit more
    slammed in the sometimes of life's predictabilty
    the shrillness of my silent scream
    slams your heart as you judge the sensibilities
    what is the correctness of what shall be done
    shunned is the door closing
     
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