im "fine"

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by hollowvoice, Oct 9, 2010.

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  1. hollowvoice

    hollowvoice Senior Member & Antiquities Friend

    I've tried to care
    but thats just me
    how can i help you
    if i cant help me

    i offer words
    just cheap advice
    i've given up on every vice

    but im not happy
    i'm all alone
    in a crowded room
    i stand on my own

    you talk to me
    i say im fine
    and now i cant fake a smile

    so here i lie in a darkened room
    peaking out behind a gloom

    i've tried to care
    but thats just me
    what once was us
    is now just me

    andi
     
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    your sadness come thru words ive said a hundred times im just fine
    knowing i was unravelling so much inside
    I hope you will soon find another to take that sadness away
    your words help so many here don't belittle that you know what it takes to care.
     
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