I'm writing songs again!!!!

Discussion in 'Rants, Musings and Ideas' started by closertolove, Nov 6, 2009.

  1. closertolove

    closertolove Well-Known Member

    It's been a while since I've written anything, but I'm working out the vocal on garage band right now!!! I'm possibly one of the least musically inclined people ever, but I'm writing songs again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    YESSSSSSSSS

    lemme know if you wanna read the lyrics/hear it when i finish
     
  2. sammakko

    sammakko Banned Member

    Nice. I like to read.
     
  3. closertolove

    closertolove Well-Known Member

    Behind your oh-so pitiful
    Shell, you're oh-so-beautiful
    Your smile doesn't show the truth
    I see you, bout to break down
    Your strength is faltering now
    How can I help you get it back?
    Your weakness is starting to show
    Trust me, I won't let you let it go

    It's all coming down, and you're starting to crack
    And the man you're trying to be
    Becomes a boy who cannot see
    The beauty of his smile or the light in his eyes
    Or joy he used to know
    Or a hand for him to hold
    Just remember this, even Superman cries

    I see you, your forehead in hand
    Unfocused eyes in a trance
    It almost makes me cry
    You're racing an unfamiliar race
    And can't keep up with time's cruel pace
    It's a losing fight
    You don't have to do this all on your own

    It's all coming down, and you're starting to crack
    And the man you're trying to be
    Becomes a boy who cannot see
    The beauty of his smile or the light in his eyes
    Or joy he used to know
    Or a hand for him to hold
    Just remember this, even Superman cries

    All I want is to see you smile
    And the light in your eyes that used to drive me wild

    It's all coming down, and you're starting to crack
    And the man you're trying to be
    Becomes a boy who cannot see
    The beauty of his smile or the light in his eyes
    Or joy he used to know
    Or a hand for him to hold
    Just remember this, even Superman cries

    Behind your oh-so-pitiful
    Shell, don''t you know you're beautiful?

    (dedicated to TG)
     
  4. Tam

    Tam Well-Known Member

    That is so moving, truly beautiful.

    Have you written music as well, any chance to hear it?
     
  5. closertolove

    closertolove Well-Known Member

    workin on that now, should have it soon
     
  6. closertolove

    closertolove Well-Known Member

    btw changed a few things
    no more "Even superman cries"
    its "even the strongest men cry"
     
  7. DrivEthermissIon

    DrivEthermissIon Banned Member

    That's great! ^__^ Everything.