Immortal Mirror

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by InnerStrength, Aug 23, 2009.

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  1. InnerStrength

    InnerStrength Well-Known Member

    “Immortal Mirror”

    What if I view my life through a mirror of immortality?
    A reflection same as my life, but existing forever…
    Pestilent and unforgiving
    Cold and uncaring…

    Swatting me with a hand of eternity
    Realization heightens the sense that my life
    Is nothing but a lesson of horrid randomness
    A failure of evolution
    Constant disdain is innate

    If I was given a choice:
    Withering away into non-existence
    Or Living longer than the sun
    I would choose the black hole
    A sweet and pleasant escape

    I would not be “returned to the universe”
    But would escape to the beyond
    An area of absent reality
    With the sword of obscurity towering high above
    This elusive plain​
  2. Confusticated

    Confusticated Well-Known Member

    Thank you for sharing this with us.
  3. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Very well written love the context and the title.
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Brilliant :heart:
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