In Darkness

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Almostgone, Jul 17, 2009.


Is it understandable

  1. yes

  2. no

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  3. sort of

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  1. Almostgone

    Almostgone Member


    In darkness I dwell in a room full of light.
    The tips of my fingers gone from holding on so tight
    Rubbed raw and unable to care.
    Into the abyss I stare….longing to no longer be aware
    Of the white hot pain that I embrace every time I think of your face.
    Rotting and gone in my mind’s eye
    I cannot think it away

    In darkness I sit where no light will permit
    Me to feel my feet on solid ground
    Suspended between Heaven and Hell I hang
    The pendulum has no balance and I am
    Running out of time.
  2. kurenai

    kurenai Well-Known Member

    I'm sorry you are feeling this terrible, but the imagery is beautiful and very clear to me.
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