In My Mind

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by AlexElm, May 5, 2011.

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  1. AlexElm

    AlexElm Well-Known Member

    I swallow the pill and pull back my head,
    I'm lost in a show, i'm out of my head

    The muted sounds of a long loved companion
    The silent sounds of an empty canyon

    I'm in a room that that is mostly wood,
    It is warm but I draw my hood.

    A candle burns slowly on the table,
    While I write this meaningless fable.

    I open my eyes and find me entwined
    With my friend, a bloodied knife.

    And I wonder what happened in this mind.
    And I wonder what happened to my happy life.

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    I actually got this idea from reading an entry from one of HarrysPeach's journal entry and got permission to post this. Thanks a lot HarrysPeach for giving me permission!

    And as always, please comment.
     
  2. black orchid

    black orchid Well-Known Member

    Really like this :)
     
  3. AlexElm

    AlexElm Well-Known Member

    Thanks!
     
  4. LilyMe

    LilyMe Member

    i know how this feels like
     
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