In the beginning I was rope...

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Aurora Gory Alice, Oct 29, 2009.

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  1. Aurora Gory Alice

    Aurora Gory Alice Well-Known Member

    In the beginning I was rope.

    They pulled, oh how they pulled.

    And before long, I was yarn.

    The pulled, oh how they pulled.

    Not soon after, I became thread.

    Once again, they pulled, and pulled and pulled...

    I broke.
     
  2. Acy

    Acy Mama Bear - TLC, Common Sense Staff Member Safety & Support

    I like this - very clever analogy that evokes powerful images.
     
  3. Aurora Gory Alice

    Aurora Gory Alice Well-Known Member

    Thanks Acy. :)
    It's actually going to be the bridge in a song I'm writing, but I still need two verses!
     
  4. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I really like this poem to very clever
     
  5. boo

    boo Well-Known Member

    lovely poem linds
     
  6. Aurora Gory Alice

    Aurora Gory Alice Well-Known Member

    Thanks guys. :)
     
  7. chickidee

    chickidee Member

    i like it a lot,,
    kinda feels like my own internal struggle right now.
    thanks for sharing,
     
  8. ZombiePringle

    ZombiePringle Forum Buddy and Antiquities Friend

    I liked it!
     
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