In The Skies Of Ethereal

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  1. elevatorpass

    elevatorpass Active Member

    In The Skies Of Ethereal
    ò Copyrighted 2013

    Slipping away I hear the good days call
    They seem to mock me from afar
    Humming-bird wings blur my site
    As nature breathes my view through scars

    Lines converge around my thought
    Created by mundane her endless trials
    Life seems rife but caught
    In seams that go on for miles

    The water levels rise
    Universal sand sparks a glass
    Drowning in high tide requiems
    You see my years do pass

    Tin-foil as my shield
    I attack the man with the gun
    But Heaven forbid he’s firing blanks
    Or that his eyes get lost in the sun

    Solitude defences
    Sold to me in droves by masks
    In missionary beliefs it will help
    With all I seek and ask

    Let water make me ill
    Let me be sick on my beautiful days
    Let the hold of pain fold
    Through orchestral scenes from aching plays

    Patrolled by Angels in the skies of ethereal
    Crowded with souls and thorns
    From the dead to the waiting in line to live
    Are cubs kittens babies fawns

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  2. elevatorpass

    elevatorpass Active Member

    I write and paint, play the guitar.. all these things keep me going.. but, since my whole body is now covered in terrible eczema .. my dark thoughts are getting very hard to cope with..

    along with depression and my breathing problems.. plus, so much else.. sorry.. I sound dramatic.. but it feels like hell..

    the black dog on my shoulder barks louder and louder each day.. so, hope you don't mind me posting my arts.. I'd love to see how people feel about them and if they see anything in them they feel in themselves and how writing can help.. albeit, a little..
    but mainly, that we are not alone.. you are not alone.. I'm not alone.. I know that..

  3. WildCherry

    WildCherry Staff Member ADMIN

    Wow... I really love your poem!! :hug: Hoping you'll post more.
  4. elevatorpass

    elevatorpass Active Member

    thanks Wild.. I have lots to post.. :) good to express.. the pain keeps the bell ringing at times.. however much we want to deafen it at times..
    I really appreciate the kind words..
  5. pit

    pit Well-Known Member

    Very deep piece. You've got a style.
  6. elevatorpass

    elevatorpass Active Member

    thanks Pit :)
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