Inaudible words of red

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  1. winston

    winston Well-Known Member

    What is it you whisper?
    far passed the slow parade
    the minute, sections of splendour
    that harmonize your face
    they're words of another spat out by some other,
    finally brought to life.

    What is it you whisper?
    my name or a forgotten word?
    the code to lost transcriptions that solve
    the riddles of your world?
    are they songs sung far and wide,
    chapters of your novel that shine brighter than your eyes?

    What is it you whisper?
    so inaudible yet so clear
    is it everything i ever wanted,
    yet everything I'll ever fear?
    A poem in rememberance, sad in verse?
    penned by the warmth of your sculpted hand, displaying the years and times of hurt

    What is it you whisper?
    something new and far between,
    playing the games which we've become accustomed
    and have pleasantly torn apart at the seams
    secrets that halp you sleep
    so frightfully displayed, it's all that you can see

    What is it you whisper?
    a call to wait behind?
    a discovery of the tarnished truth,
    dug deep within the mercy of your mind
    you cry within a happy sense,
    for every routine necessity, is replaced by true loves accidents

    What is it you whisper?
    will you ever ask the same?
    will you ever touch my lost soul,
    and stutter out my name?
    I can whisper too, whisper both me and you,
    but first you have to tell me, what is it you whisper?
     
  2. BelovedDreamer

    BelovedDreamer Well-Known Member

    oooh, nice.
     
  3. winston

    winston Well-Known Member

    Thanks:smile:
     
  4. Spearmint

    Spearmint Well-Known Member

    That's really good. :smile:
     
  5. winston

    winston Well-Known Member

    Ta for that.
     
  6. Amazazing! :biggrin: I love it!
     
  7. winston

    winston Well-Known Member

    Thanks a lot

    much appreciated
     
  8. ACRon

    ACRon Well-Known Member

    a great read, well done
     
  9. winston

    winston Well-Known Member

    cheers:smile:
     
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