Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by FoundAndLost1, Dec 22, 2006.

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  1. Alone in circles
    Chased by rabid thoughts
    that surely mean
    to devour all sense and reason
    In their mad insatiable fury
    stealing midnight hours
    just as the logic in a day;
    It’s all the same
    Voracious in appetite
    Never satisfied
    And just when you think you’ve truly died,
    and your eyes have seen too much inside
    the circle starts again
    Demanding, draining more energy
    than there is left within
    And how will this all end,
    when there’s no more sanity
    left to defend
    And who will tell the tale of pain
    when no language of reason

  2. ~CazzaAngel~

    ~CazzaAngel~ Staff Alumni

    A lot of those feelings overwhelm me too. It's amazing how sometimes I don't know what's going on with me besides pain and I don't understand any of it, and you can sit down and type it out so neatly. I wish I had that in me, like you do. Thank you dor sharing, you always have such amazing poems. :hug: :clap: :yes: :yeah:
  3. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Dear FAL1;

    Love the poem:smile: , hate the feelings...:sad:


  4. The_Discarded

    The_Discarded Staff Alumni

    Serious brilliance with a chilling hint of truth.

    Muy bien.
  5. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    wonderful poem hun...

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