Inside The Soul.

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Corieh Infected, Apr 20, 2008.

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  1. Corieh Infected

    Corieh Infected Well-Known Member

    So, I dunno. Since my writings are random, I'll just keep this one thread, and post whenever I feel like writing something..
     
  2. Corieh Infected

    Corieh Infected Well-Known Member

    Broken

    It started out so small,
    You almost never would have noticed.
    The tiny little crack,
    That led to the worst thing ever.

    You might call it unimportant,
    To me it is the world.
    You held my heart inside your hands,
    But you squeezed a bit too hard.

    It started out really small,
    Just some pain here and there.
    Then one day it became too much,
    I didn’t feel tough anymore.

    I feel broken right about now,
    And it’s all because of you.
    Actually that’s a lie,
    I did this too myself.

    I put my trust in your hands,
    Expecting that I’d be safe.
    How wrong was I when I felt,
    That tiny crack begin.

    For once I’ve realized,
    I can’t trust you.
    Not only you though,
    I can’t trust anyone.

    My heart’s broken,
    Feels like I’m shattered to pieces.
    I thought I could trust you, Savior,
    It looks like I was wrong.
     
  3. Corieh Infected

    Corieh Infected Well-Known Member

    Betrayed

    I kinda figured you cared about me,
    Then again I knew it had to be a lie.
    When she’s right there infront of you,
    How could you even look at me?

    I sorta hoped that you’d forget,
    The imperfections that I have.
    You can’t get past them though,
    They’re really all you see.

    So if all I am is imperfections,
    If that’s just how you see me.
    I really don’t think I even want,
    To be a part of you.
     
  4. Forsaken Heretic

    Forsaken Heretic Well-Known Member

    Nice poems. It feels to be written with a lot of emotion, which makes for really good poetry. Post more stuff, I'd love to read more.
     
  5. Lead Savior

    Lead Savior Well-Known Member

    @ Broken
    I'm sorry that this person made you feel the way you do. Pleading ignorance is no excuse of course, but it can still absolve them of malicious intent. I am sure that they did not mean to hurt you.


    @ Betrayed
    In my opinion, imperfections are what make the person. If you feel that the person in this poem dislikes you because of those imperfections, then to hell with them.

    Great writing
     
  6. Corieh Infected

    Corieh Infected Well-Known Member

    Butterflies

    There are butterflies in my stomach,
    Flying around in vain.
    They can’t escape and express themselves,
    They are forever trapped.

    He put the butterflies there,
    Just by looking towards me.
    It feels like my chest is about to burst,
    With all of this feeling I have.

    My throat closes up,
    I find it hard to breathe.
    The craziest thing of all,
    He doesn’t even know I’m this way.
     
  7. Corieh Infected

    Corieh Infected Well-Known Member

    Savior

    He’s my Savior,
    The person I look up to.
    Without him I’d be lost,
    He keeps me on the ground.

    Sometimes I really don’t like him,
    Other times I wish he’d never leave.
    Savior why is it this way,
    Why must life be so complicated?

    You know how I feel,
    But how could you?
    Why even I have no idea,
    Why these emotions run through my body.

    This might be my confession,
    Then again I may have more secrets.
    I guess you’ll never really know,
    Just why I feel this way.
     
  8. Corieh Infected

    Corieh Infected Well-Known Member

    Imperfections

    My imperfections do stand out,
    They’re just hard to ignore.
    Something like a number,
    Representing my age.

    Other stuff like medicine,
    Showing that I have problems.
    Silly stuff like tears,
    Show how sensitive I am.

    I’m perfect in my imperfections,
    So please look at me that way.
    Love me for who I really am,
    Not for what I pretend to be.
     
  9. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Great poems hun :arms:
     
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