Insides Out

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by A.SoNiC.boY, Oct 2, 2010.

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  1. A.SoNiC.boY

    A.SoNiC.boY Well-Known Member

    Tainted soul and tainted breath
    My hearts so still within my chest
    Limb from limb, I'd rather be ripped
    Then have my heart cut out like this
    Bleeding from my insides out
    Melted faith, I'm full of doubt
    In the end if I die, and fall away
    Nothing more will you need to say
     
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    VEry well written i feel your pain. I hope in time your heart heals
     
  3. Twinkle ☆ Twinkle

    Twinkle ☆ Twinkle Well-Known Member

    It's deep and I like your word ussage.
     
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